A few awkward spots of word choice and it focused a tiny bit too much on the history of events instead of what the movie was concerned with, but overall a nice presentation that covered most topics. A little more focus on how the director chose his sources would have been clarifying.
It's really clear you understood the central message, and your insights are thoughtful and interesting. However, your format could use more work, and occasionally your transitions are a little abrupt. You do a good job emphasizing your points, but consistency in layout, etc. could definitely help. I feel it might be better if you take the slides where you introduce Stanley Nelson to the front - just play around a bit with the organization.
We thought that there was great depth in discussing the summary of the movie and the author's central message. To more effectively convey the message of the movie you could have used more pictures and worked on the organization of the presentation. Jacob thinks you could have used the sources more effectively, as well, such as more specific examples. J and J
You clearly conveyed the central message of the film. Also, we think you used the tool very effectively and created a good presentation. You wrote just a little to much on each slide though, maybe you could make your thoughts more concise.
A few awkward spots of word choice and it focused a tiny bit too much on the history of events instead of what the movie was concerned with, but overall a nice presentation that covered most topics. A little more focus on how the director chose his sources would have been clarifying.
ReplyDeleteIt's really clear you understood the central message, and your insights are thoughtful and interesting. However, your format could use more work, and occasionally your transitions are a little abrupt. You do a good job emphasizing your points, but consistency in layout, etc. could definitely help. I feel it might be better if you take the slides where you introduce Stanley Nelson to the front - just play around a bit with the organization.
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We thought that there was great depth in discussing the summary of the movie and the author's central message. To more effectively convey the message of the movie you could have used more pictures and worked on the organization of the presentation. Jacob thinks you could have used the sources more effectively, as well, such as more specific examples.
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I can tell that you understood the deeper meaning of the film. good job at being consistent and having cohesiveness with all of your slides.
ReplyDeleteHowever, for having 27 slides there is a lot of information piled onto some of your slides.
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You clearly conveyed the central message of the film. Also, we think you used the tool very effectively and created a good presentation. You wrote just a little to much on each slide though, maybe you could make your thoughts more concise.
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